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Creative Writing

final project

As same as normal, we tried our hardest to collect the jewels in the mine. we were heading back towards our home when i spotted a light coming through the windows of our houses. i knew it would be a thief trying to steal the jewels i had brought home last time. i knew this would happen. I decided to surprise the thief so i told my friends to quiet down and we sneaked. towards our home. we quietly opened the door but to our surprise found out that our house was perfect everything we left that was messy was gone and clean. we still crept across the lit up room and headed towards the second floor were it was dark and quiet. As the door opened, we saw not a thief but a young lady sleeping in our beds. we could not wake her up since she was sleeping but soon she woke up startled by us. She told us that she had been chased by a hunter who was told to kill her but he had let her go. She told us that she would clean the house and make food which was the good part. therefore, we chose to let her stay.

We had fun for most of the times dancing and singing with her and having food everytime we return from our work and She even told us stories to entertain us. Therefore, we let he sleep in our beds and we slept the first But one day we returned from the mine and we found something strange. all the animal tried to push us back towards our houses, however, when we got to the house, the house was not lit and snow white was lying down on the first floor of our house. we were sure that she was dead and we put her in a coffin made of glass so we could see her every time we visited her. however, a prince came passing by and kissed her, then something amazing happened she woke up. we were so happy but sadly the prince took snow white.

About a Girl Named Dot Dot was a leader of the nomad people. She often traveled to the south where it was always warm. Therefore, she was an excellent swimmer and she was used to the heat. She could catch fish very easily with her hands. Also she loved nature. Therefore, she always spent her time with the nature. 2.Free Write I love to watch movies. I watch them on TV normally on Saturdays. There are two reasons for this. One is when I watch movies, I feel like I am relaxed since I don’t think about how much homework I have and how badly I did an assignment. This helps me really relax. Normally, when I rest reading a book, I feel like I don’t have the time to read books even though I finished all my homework. Another reason that I like watching movies are because I feel like the main character. this makes me really excited and from this I can experience many different types of people and also it helps me be more creative. 3.Describe a Bored Person The person gazed at the dot on the board in the classroom. His eyelids like lead, his eyelids drooped like a loose skin. He leaned toward his right leaning on his arm. he often glances at the clock only figuring out that he has another thirty minutes. He tried to keep himself awake by stretching but it seemed to have no effect. He tried to talk to his friend but his friend did not answer him. finally it was the time for him to leave and he slowly stood up his eyes still half closed. Sunday 23rd 2009 4. Describe the Object You were Looking at The object i was looking at was covered aluminum and it produced light out of the back of the object. In the inside, it had many black buttons in different sizes printed alphabets. The color of the alphabet where white and on one button there was an green light coming out of the top left corner of the button. Around the buttons coved with aluminum but the bottom of the aluminum was covered with black large sticker leaving a big rectangular hole in the middle. the edges of the screen were silver. it had a camera on the top side of the screen and had dents on the corners of the screen. On the back of it, it had a leather sticker on, leaving the apple mark in the middle 5.Describe a Silly Person or a Thing Silly is a lazy boy who comes to school sleepily with out his school homework left on the desk at his house all finished last night, thinking that the teachers won’t be able to find out that he is trying to finish his homework for the last class in the first class of the day.

Silly is a intelligent who leaps over the chairs to bite open the beef jerky snack package for the owner’s son and hiding the rotten cheese smelling beef jerky under the bed thinking that the owner won’t be able to find out.

Silly is a middle aged man who goes to the gas station only finding that he has only enough money to drive his car to his house so he buys that much of gas, then going home only to get money and ride a bus to the gas station to get more gas.

6. Describe the Bedroom the Way You Want it to Be I think that I need another desk for my computer, by getting a computer desk, it will let me get organized and I won’t have to try to put all my math textbooks, and other books on the exploding shelf on the desk. I also would use the other desk to put my laptop on and I could keep all the school textbooks and notebooks on the shelf on the table. The table I want is not so big but just enough to be able to put my laptop and a notebook. This is so when I have to look at the Ebook, it will be easier for me to get organized. I would like a comfortable chair that I can relax in. This is because in my bed room, there is this small chair I can barley sit on and the bottom of the chair is tilted toward the ground therefore after 5 minuets of sitting, I find my self almost off the chair. Therefore I can’t really concentrate when I am studying. so I would really want a big comfy chair that I can relax in. I also would be happy if I had globe in my room. This is because I can save time when I have social studies or other subject assignments where it would be helpful if I had the world map. This is because I wouldn’t have to get on my laptop to get the map. I have seen a globe that shows all the constellation which I can look at at my leisure time. Therefore I would like to have a globe that shows all the constellation.

7.40 things that happened to me this month. 8. A paragraph about a cat attacking something without hiss, scratched or pounce. The cat waited silently behind the boxes on the pitch-black misty night. The cat was glaring at the mouse eating the pieces of bread. Then, it suddenly leaped out and clawed at the mouse. The mouse squeaked and ran away from the cat bleeding from it’s back. The cat leaped over and smacked the mouse with it’s paw and before the mouse could start running again, the cat swallowed the mouse alive. 9. Free write Time is something that seems to change all the time in different point of views. for example if someone is doing something that they enjoy, the time flows quickly. however, if someone is doing that they do not enjoy, time stretches. Time makes things unfair since when you want the time to go fast it doesn't but it does when you don't want it to. Also, time can't be turned back nor be predicted. Once time passes, nothing can rewind it. time can't be predicted by anything. people can make guesses, however, they can't know the definite future in time. some people think that it is possible to time travel but that would not make sense since if the people from the future time traveled, why would they not be here in our time. If time machines was invented in the future, then there would be people from the future in our time doing things for us and help us develop. therefore, in my point of view time can't be re winded nor be fast forwarded. 10. free write If a person grow older many things change. one of the things that change is your amount of responsibility. if the person is young, you have less responsibility and if you make a mistake people give you second chances. however, as you grow older, you gain more responsibility and have to be responsible for their passports and many other things. Also, if a person grow older, you get more freedom and you can manage your self and you won't have to do everything your parents tell you. this is because as a person grow older, you get to get out of the parents ordering you to do things. therefore, if you grow older, you get more freedom. Also, if the person grow older you get more respect. this is because if you are older, you have more experience and people will respect that. also, since the person ill have a more depth in thought they will respect the person for that too.
 * 1) i got my computer reimmaged
 * 2) i dropped my macbook
 * 3) i had a hard time printing in school
 * 4) i bought a external harddrive
 * 5) i backed up my computer
 * 6) my macbook broke so the as people changed the hard drive
 * 7) i went to school
 * 8) i got my clubs
 * 9) i again dropped my macbook in class
 * 10) i finished my art project
 * 11) i went shopping
 * 12) i bought a new school bag
 * 13) my sister came back from Norway
 * 14) people came from cisv
 * 15) i couldn't get off the bus since people crowded the exit
 * 16) i played with james
 * 17) i watched movie with james
 * 18) i watched movie with J
 * 19) my sister got her macbook
 * 20) my sister got her macbook reimmaged
 * 21) my friend gave me a piece of gum
 * 22) i did science experiments
 * 23) i grew five cm
 * 24) my dad bought me shoes
 * 25) i bought a pair of jeans
 * 26) the printer at my house didn't work for my computer after reimmaging so i could not print my homework
 * 27) i was using the wrong account on my mac so i had to go to the it office
 * 28) i went to watch a movie with my family
 * 29) i took my math test.
 * 30) i finished my piled up homework.
 * 31) i ate steak
 * 32) i got to play with a cat
 * 33) i got to play with a dog
 * 34) i ate pudding
 * 35) i took math test
 * 36) i took my science test
 * 37) i did an experiment in science class
 * 38) i lost my id card
 * 39) i found my id card
 * 40) my macbook charger broke but i fixed it.

11. describe fatima It was Fatima's birthday. She called all of her friends expecting her parents to pay for all her costs. She chose to use a five star hotel as her place for the partying place. She had bought the hotel with her mom’s credit card. The were jewelry all over her and the fanciest clothes you could imagine.

For her birthday present, her parents decided to give her two newest cars from Benz, Audi and BMW. However, she was not satisfied with this. She also wanted Ferrari Mustang and Porsche. Her parents did not have time to order all these cars. So they could not order the Ferrari and Porsche.

As Fatima heard of this news, she stared to get red and screamed at their parents to get it to her this instant. Her parents did not know what to do. Fatima’s face started to blow up any time. Her parents finally decide what to do and they promised her that they would get them by tomorrow.

12. describe the feel right now using your sense of smell. I sense the smell the lunch in front of me. I have starved to death not eating my breakfast. The school lunch is normally 40 minutes before the lunch now. The school made us adapt to the early lunch or breakfast as many people call. However, now, they changed it again and by the time we adapt to it, the lunchtime will change.

This makes me angry since, it makes me feel like they are playing with our lunchtime just for fun. If they at least keep the lunch schedule the same for a year, we won’t have t suffer from hunger everyday. I hope they will change that.

Also, I can smell the had sanitizer that everybody uses for fun. I hate this smell and some people are using this for the smell and the feel of the liquid. Because of this, I feel frustrated. I hope, if I tell them to squeeze the tap once, it will reduce the smell of the hand sanitizer.

13. cartoon that appeal to over 65 year old audience. The character in this comic is about an old man around seventy years old named bob. The old man has a grandson. His grandson named James likes to follow whatever his grand parents do. For example, when Bob gets some ice cream from the freezer, his grandson tries to reach the freezer but he cant. Therefore, he uses a stick to open the freezer but the stick breaks. Then he gets a golf club and finally gets to open the freezer’s door. The ice cream is in a black plastic bag so he puts his head in to the black plastic bag and Bob finds him with his grandson head stuck in the plastic bag.

14. If there is no power,
 * 1) everybody would be playing outdoors
 * 2) play boardgames indoors
 * 3) play with friends
 * 4) read books
 * 5) go to the playground
 * 6) send mails to friends
 * 7) use candles to light the rooms
 * 8) use bicycle and horses for transportation
 * 9) sleep early since there are less light in you room.
 * 10) buy only a little bit of food because you can't store it.
 * 11) eat less food from other countries since there is no electricity for freezing the food
 * 12) breath in cleaner air since there are no cars
 * 13) have to hand write all the assignments
 * 14) get more infection since keeping drugs in hospital is harder.
 * 15) don't move a lot since there it is hard to move all the furniture
 * 16) live in one floor house since there is no electricity for the elevator
 * 17) less jobs since jobs having to do with computers disappear.
 * 18) hard to eat cooked food since you have to make a fire.
 * 19) no nice clothes since there aren't tools for knitting
 * 20) no furniture sine there are less tools

15.Bea was girl who loved bees. She thought that bees were the worst animals in the world. However, she changed this idea because of one thing that happened to her. One day she was killing the bees in her yard, she found a wild dog attacking her. She tried to run away but she fell down and got bitten and stepped on her. However, the bees were too small for the dog to bite the bees. Therefore, the bees stung the dog. Bea never wanted to be a bee. However, now she is wishing she was a bee.

16.what i do on a rainy day. 1. play games 2. watch TV 3. do math homework 4. ichat with friends 5. surf on the internet 6. review the science textbook for the test 7. do social studies homework 8. write journals for creative writing class 9. read the English novels for school 10. video chat with friends On a rainy day, I would do homework, not noticing that it is raining. I would be on my desk no looking out the window. I would be worried about the upcoming science test about the microscope. I would look thought the pages of the book looking at what I would have to study. I would skim through the book highlighting the vocabularies the teacher mentioned. By doing this I can know what I would have to do so I would remember the important things. After that, I would go back though and read every word on the textbook to get the details of the sections. By doing this, I can know what came out in details such as names. Also if I didn't know something, I can understand it better.

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17. Rhyme paragraph winter is full with young sprinters. Small children throwing snowball. Everyone making snowman melting from the sun. Snowflakes fall from the sky like crumbs of cake.

18. Free write creative writing class is a new class available in kis. This class is a advanced writing class and it will help you improve your creative thinking skills and writing skills. In this class, we make poems using different ways, choose a creative object and describe it. This class differs from the required English class since it challenges you to be a better writer. Everyday, students get a prompt and they have to make a paragraph from it. For example, a prompt may be to write a paragraph about a board person not using some common vocabulary. After taking this class the students will be more creative and be a better writer.

19.spark a poem with the metaphor chest of childhood

20.free write the online textbooks are not working out for the students in kis. Since the start of school, the students have been asking their parents to buy the textbook. One reason they are doing this is that they are having a problem loading the pages. Some students don't have such a good Internet connection in their homes. Therefore it takes ten minutes to go to the next page. Sometimes laces like under their desks or on the ground give them a better connection to the Internet, therefore, students are studying on the ground not on their desk. This has been a problem to the students and they are expecting the school to not use the online textbook.

21. write a paragraph incorporating at least ten onomatopoetic words. The boy hiccuped as he ran swiftly to his house for a drink of water. When he was crossing the street, he noticed the truck beeping at him and he jumped away and the break of the truck squeaked and the truck swooshed against he boy's arms. He jumped and bounced against the other side of the street. He was uninjured and went to his house and watching his mom make popcorn. Even after the popcorn was done, it popped and fizzed. We were till hiccuping and gulped down the fizzing coke.

coke bottle museum answers

1. i found a book very real looking and flipped through the pages only to figure out that it was empty with no words in them 2. once there was a beautiful pond with fishes swimming all over the pond and swans using it's water to clean itself. on a hot day, the boy decided to swim in the pond after working so hard. he jumped in the pond drowning in the deep cold water. 3. i walked through the buildings soaring above the clouds. all sorts of buildings were humongous. the McDonald's sign could not be seen so up in the clouds. i felt like a cm tall with the street lamps tall as a buildings. i walked through the buildings knowing i would never make it there and i stood not knowing what to do feeling lost in the buildings

22. free write

23. use five pair of opposites in a paragraph there are many different types of ways of transportation. some are small and some all bigger than others. for example a plane made for transportation can normally carry more than 60 people. however, vehicles like motorcycles can carry one to two people. planes have jet engines that are very powerful and fast while the motors of a motorcycle is weaker and slower. also the engins of the motorcycles are quiet compared to the noisy airplanes. airplanes are used to go overseas or far distances while motorcycles can't go overseas but can go short distances on land.

poem the poor

By constantly tormenting them with reminders of the lice in their children's hair, the School Physician first brought their hatred down on him. But by this familiarity they grew used to him, and so, at last, took him for their friend and adviser.

William Carlos Williams

The spoiled

By constantly them with anger and wining in their children’s hair, the mom and dad first brought what they wanted but by this sadly they did not like it, and so, at last, took him to the mall for them to choose.

Brian Kang

24.weave a story around this mixed proverb: silence is a great healer Bob was boiling and felt cold as if it was winter. it was his birthday in April. his mom wanted to have a birthday party even though he was sick so she call of his friends. Bob felt better with his friends beside him at first but as time passed by, his friends were running all around the place screaming and jumping all over the place.

He wanted to sleep in peace and even with the door closed he could hear the games that the friends played and the TV almost the volume to the maximum. when he finally fell asleep a friend bumped in to door and Bob waked up from his sleep. he wanted to to the friends and tell them to be quiet but he could not get up. he was too tired.

when all the friends left the house was quiet again. he could sleep now and get some rest. when he woke up, his headache was gone and he didn't feel so sick as he used to. he realized that silence is a great healer.

macbook! macbook! glowing bright In the desks of the students, What beautiful keyboard or screen Could frame thy awesome technology? In what distant deeps or skies gave the electricity of clear screens? On what wings dare he aspire? What the hand dare use the keyboard? And what shoulder, and what hand, Could touch the track pad of thy macbook? And when they heart began to thump, What dread hand? and what dread feet?

25.make a paragrap starting with the grass smelled red the grass smelled red. the grass was tall and wild. as Bob walked on the grass the smell of a rose came up. the birds and the insects attracted by this sweet smell got the grass mistaken for a flower. Bob picked up a had full of grass and squeezed it in his hands. A red liquid came out arouse the scent of a rose.

26. describe Chris by only describing the reactions of the people in the room. Chris walked into the room. everybody watched him as he chose where to sit in the class. the boy who Chris sat next to frowned and stood up as if he was wanting to talk with his friends and quickly found another seat. all sides of Chris's seats became empty. everybody started to breath through their mouth. a boy ran up towards him and snatched Cris's glasses away and threw it across the room. his friend caught it and tossed it around until the teacher came in.

27. Free write He woke up because of the howling wind. He sat and listened there was a sound coming from the hallway as if a person was walking across the half rotten wood. The sound got closer and closer. Suddenly he woke up from his dream. His mom saw him sweat in his dream and had waked him up. Bob every night had a dream where the dream would continue every night.

He started dreaming at the age of eight he first dream of a young boy's life. He thought it was just a dream until his dreamed matched the events of his life. The scar y thing was that he was now dreaming of the same thing over and over again. The dream was about a man coming in his house and killing all of his family.

Everyday he was nervous every day. Every night he could not sleep properly. He didn't want to dream of the man. He kept himself awake every night and never dreamed of it anymore.

28. He scrubbed me with a hard brush and with soap. It was itchy and hurt a little bit but i wanted to be clean again. I once was coated and glimmered like a mirror, however, the constant steeping and stomping, the coat has worn out. now if a person stepped on me, i would get a footprint on me. therefore, everyday, i get dirtier and dirtier. i am used to being clean and now even if it hurts a little bit, it is worth being clean again.

29. describe the car that a person rides. describe the person it was a red mustang. it looked brand new and it rumbled and sped away. the car was washed everyday. the windows were perfectly clear. the seat of the car was made up of red and black leather and had no traces of stains or marks of any kind. inside of the car, there was a bottle of coke and cigarettes. also there was sunglasses and a jacket.

30. free write The plane started to shake and seat belt sign turned on. I could hear the alarm from the pilot's seat. the small plane shook from side to side like a rocking chair. black smoke filled in the plane. the five people were ducking their head to breath in as much as pure water as possible. the tail of the plane started to crack. the cracks got bigger. The tail flew away with some passengers in it. The oxygen masks flew out and the passengers tried to grab it. however, they were tossed around in the turning plane. They were all panicking and screaming. the plane bursted with a flash. The flames were all over the plane. the survivors were crawling against the group trying to escape when the flames reached the fuel tank and explode. there were no survivors.

31.freewrite He ran towards the bus that was leaving. it was his ninth time. Jay was a boy who was always late to everything. He sometimes seemed as if he was purposely being late. however he was not. he tried his best to not be late but that was never possible. He every night did not pack up his bag. Therefore, he could not pack up in time in the morning. He also did not bring everything he needed to bring.

32. freewrite It was early in the morning. My mom woke me up and told me to get dressed. It was saturday morning. the day of the cross country. i wasn't nervous. i had other jamborees before. I knew i could make it if i don't start to get lazy and walk. on the last jamboree, i kind of started to walk the up hill .however, when i got to sams, i was sleepy and felt like sleeping. I knew it would be easier since there would be less hills in the rout. This made me feel better because it would be less tireing.

33. from writing the short story, i had to have a good story line. to have a good story line i figured out that i had to read it again and again. also i would make a mistake and i wouldn't e able to find it so i would have to ask a friend to see what was wrong. if i could do this again, i would take more time on the plot and then worry about the mistakes i made. this would save me time and effort since i took time on correcting the mistakes but figured out that the storyline was wrong and did my story again.

34.free write

35. the elevator stopped and went black. the sound of the motor stopped and there was a dead silence. "Are we going to suffocate in this elevator?" said the teenager in panic "hope we don't. because i need to make my cake in the fifth floor. replied the cook. i ve heard that nowadays, the elevators don't fall. which is good. and also blackouts don't last so long so we would be fine. at that time, the elevator screeched as it slid down few meters and stopped. the church organist started to panic shouting help and bagging on the door hoping he would be heard by someone. he started walking all over the place in the elevator mumbling stuff to himself when he realized that he would not be able to be heard by anyone. The teenager and the cook sat down silently. Hey, which floor is your bakery? because my mom's birthday is the day after tomorrow and i need to buy a cake. then the elevator rushed down and everybody started screaming

36. Two of our pet loving people rotating through day and night to give the best care for your dogs. We will stay at your house 24 hours a day as long as you want. We will be awake and with the dog when the dog is awake.

37. A text messaging is the way of communicating in a way of writing like a mail but is not sent physically but through machines and the person who would receive the mail would get it almost instantly and would be able to write back to the person.

38.what i did for my add. Our group decided to advertise a macbook case. to make this case stand out from others, we said that it is thin, light weighted and strong at the same time. We, to prove this, we decided to show that even swords could not penetrate it and even dropping it from a high distance would not break it.

39. If i had three wishes, it would be so that i could be getting a new macbook because the mabook i am using doesn't work every two days and it does not turn on every 3 months. because of this, in the summer, i had to do the summer reading assignment all over again a week before it was due. also another wish was to redo sixth grade again. by doing this i could get a better grade and spend my time more efficiently. the last wish is so that i could be smart therefore, i could do get a good grade without having to trying something hard

what does the look on the boy's face mean? what might have led up such an expression? He must have done something wrong and he is kind of laughing about the thing he did. A caption for the picture Why me, all my bothers could have done it to.

40.i have been lost in a book called the titan's curse because it contained many actions that i liked the books use the description to help the reader imagine the events but do not give so much descriptions so that they would not to the imagining A fictional character is Thila, a girl whose father is zeus and wears Gothic like clothes and she wants to gain power while holding hands with the evil. she needs to decide between getting a power that would over throw the Olympus or suffering and taking a risk

41.In my birthday, i did a paintball game and most of my close friends and we ate chickens. also on the last game, i was the last survivor and i was in a bunker until twelve people came at me and shot all over me.

42.what not to do could be a program that teaches people what not to do when they go to other countries. they could pick a country every time and tell what not to do in that country.

43.i think that it would be an disadvantage because if countries could control the weather, the powerful countries would take all the moisture out of all the other countries and because of this would cause many wars fighting over the moisture and the perfect climate. also, if we know what the weather would be like, there would be no excitement of having snow or a sunny day.

44.i think that it would be bad if we could control the weather since people say, when you make your country rain to gain more water, the moisture would be drained from other near by countries.this would cause drought in countries that had plenty of rain and cause even more drought in dry countries. therefore, it would cause wars over the control of the rain.

45. it was Christmas eve. i took out my macbook and dimmed the screen. on the previous day, i had downloaded a program where if someone touches the keyboards or the track pad, the screen will flash and would take a picture. it was dark in the house but the flash on the screen would brighten the space in front of it. I did not try to hide the green dot by the camera and set on the corner. the green dot was very viable and my mom knew what it was. i pretended to sleep but through the opening in the door, i could see my macbook. my mom came and the first thing she did was

47. she jumped around smiling. it was the day when her school ended. she quickly headed towards the bus to get to her home as fast as she could. she needed to play with her friends as much as she could.

48. the dog was skinny but it's hide was loose as if someone had skinned it and it was black and white as if the paint was half mixed also it's legs were crooked inwards.

49. i was resting on the table peacefully when he lazily took out a bag of potato chip and came towards the couch. he ripped the bag open and grabbed a bunch of potato chip. with the same hand, he grabbed me covering me with oil. then, he rubbed his fingers on the buttons and turned the channel back and forth. he wanted to watch both channels. that was when the lightening hit the house. the tv went blank and he threw me as if he would never watch the tv again.

50. If you do not risk anything, you would be in a risk because to gain something, you have to risk something. for example, if you want to graduate in school, you have to study and risk the chance of succeeding or failing. therefore, if you do not risk the chance of failing, you wil no matter what fail.

51.my story is based on what wold happen if the global warming went out of hand. In my story, new plants and insects emerge with skin caners and other symptoms that would appear when exposed to direct sunlight. because of these reasons, people can't farm. also the destruction of the ozone layer doesn't let us go outside during the day and even the night.
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